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I cannot remember a lot of things, the majority of things, anyway, but that is understandable, that is excused. However, this time, what I can't remember is more recent and not a memory from post-death. It's something I should have remembered very vividly even weeks after I'd said it. After I'd closed the deal.

I didn't regret it- no, how could I regret it, now with Hanna standing here and blathering on to a twelve-year-old-boy (who was making sure the conversation kept Hanna seeming a fool, making all his remarks sarcastic and knowing Hanna was oblivious to A LOT of sarcasm thrown his way). Several times I had already tried to step in and help Hanna see that he was being made fun of, but naturally, either Hanna didn't care, or didn't seem to show he understood even when I pointed it out to him. So I gave up and stood here waiting to be acknowledged, but not expecting it very soon.

I looked around. It was freezing cold and I was feeling nothing but remorse. Why had I not remembered? It pained my heart a little, I think, that last night when he came home with those big eyes brighter than usual, carrying a box too wide for him to handle, I didn't immediately come around and understand what the contents were all for. Not even when he showed me the foe-silk material he was going to fashion the cloak out of did I remember. It took his little frown, his bottom lip out just a fraction of an inch, and his eyebrows sliding together very slowly as he spoke and told me what I'd forgotten.

I feigned total understanding, and inside, I broke apart a little. How had I forgotten the promise I'd made, how had I forgotten that extra-bright look in Hanna's eyes? How could anyone forget anything they promised Hanna? That should surely be a crime; I would happily do the time if it rid me of the guilt I still felt.

I saw Hanna's breath in the air and I wished we didn't have to stand outside, but he insisted that it was part of the experience and to go and sit INSIDE would ruin everything anyway, because then how could he really APPRECIATE the end result? I didn't protest anymore, and kept my hands deep in my pockets, and the brim of my hat turned down.

Though of course, the moment he broke the conversation with the twelve-year-old and was looking back at me with those same large, excited eyes, I forgot the cold and the damp, and anything that was bothering me melted into the sidewalk. I was ready to make up for forgetting, even if he didn't know I had forgotten in the first place.

"Alabaster, isn't this exciting!? It's almost midnight and I'm still awake! I'm still awake and I can say I saw Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince the day it came out!"
Characters: {...} and Hanna Falk Cross.

Notes: So here you are. The OTHER side of me. XD No, I dont have proof that Hanna is a HP fan, BUT YOU KNOW HE PROLLY IS, RITE? Rite.
This is silly and just fun. I'msosorryifitfailed. D:

OHMYGOD. KAY. SO. SOMEONE DID A FANART OF THISSSS. GO LOOK.
:iconrhiannon713: [link]

Hanna is Not a Boy's Name, a beautiful, wonderful, perfect webcomic, as well as the characters {...} and Hanna Falk Cross belong to :iconvert-is-ninja:[link]

REVIEW IF.........

1. You wanna see me write more.

2. You have criticism.

3. You love me. :]

4. You hate me. ]:

5. BAHAHAHA YOU READ TO NUMBER FIVE. Now you must review or OHMIGAWD A SQUAD OF NINJA ASSASSINS WILL HIDE IN YOUR CLOSET AND FORCE YOU TO EAT HAM AND CHEESE SANDWICHES FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFEEEE. Lolz. This is coo'.

No, srs though. Review. D: PLEASE?
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UncleKasu Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010
Oh gosh, at first I thought {...} had forgotten something LIEK SUPER AMAZINGLY IMPORTANT.

And then - Harry Potter. Hanna WOULD like Harry Potter tho. XD
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010  Student Writer
XD WH0000T. That was my goal.
And yes, Hanna WOULD be a Potterfanatic.
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UncleKasu Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010
Well, you really accomplished it - I got really worried!
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010  Student Writer
xD GOOD.
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drashian Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
"OHMYGOD DUDE I WONDER IF YOUR NAME WAS LIKE SIRIUS THAT WOULD BE SO COOL OH MAN THIS IS GONNA BE THE BEST MOVIE EVER BUT I HOPE THEY DON'T CHANGE TOO MUCH CAUSE THEY CHANGED A BUNCHA THINGS IN THE OTHER MOVIES BUT I'VE READ THE BOOKS TWENTY-EIGHT TIMES AND MAN I ALMOST HAVE THIS ONE MEMORIZED HAVE YOU READ THEM YET YOU REALLY SHOULD THEY'RE AWESOME THADDEUS OHHH HEY THEY'RE LETTING PEOPLE IN COME ON YOU HAVE THE TICKETS RIGHT CAUSE I SURE DON'T AND OH MAN IF WE FORGOT THEM I'D BE SO SAD OKAY GOOD YOU HAVE THEM LET'S GO IN OH MAN YOUR COSTUME IS SO AWESOME HOW'S MY RON COSTUME BUT WAIT YOU HAVEN'T EVEN SEEN THE OTHER MOVIES YET CRAP WE'RE GONNA HAVE TO HAVE A MARATHON TONIGHT EXCEPT I MIGHT BE TOO TIRED HOW ABOUT TOMORROW ONCE I WAKE UP OKAY OKAY LET'S GO IN WHY ARE THEY LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT AM I BEING TOO LOUD OKAY FINE I'LL BE QUIET"
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Student Writer
Spot.
Fucking.
On.


< 3
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drashian Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That took so fucking long to write but SHIT MAN he'd be so loud even as the movie was starting.

"OH MAN THIS IS THE BEST PART LOOK OKAY FINE I'LL BE QUIET BUT DUDE THEY CHANGED THAT FROM THE BOO-- OKAY DUDE I'M BEING QUIET"
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Student Writer
SRSLYRITE? AHAHA.
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drashian Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hanna's like those little kids that talk and laugh and whisper and bounce and cry and you really get annoyed but they're enjoying themselves so much you can't tell them to shut up because at least they like the movie!
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Student Writer
XD I LOVE YOUUUUUU.
THAT IS EXACTLY HANNA IN MY HEAD.
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drashian Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE YOU TOOOOO

Hanna's like. Five years old. And you can't say no because it would BREAK HIS HEART!
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Student Writer
I KNOWWWW. THE POUUUUT. D8
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Eloarei Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha that is so silly, I just love it. =D Lol I always love a good unexpected punch-line. ^^
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Student Writer
x] So glad you liked.
Isnt :iconrhiannon713:'s stuff AMAZING? 8D
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Eloarei Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
^__^ Oh, yes, it absolutely is. *Rhiannon713 was the reason I got into HINABN actually, so I'm particularly fond of anything she draws.
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Student Writer
AWRH. <3 Rhiannon is ftw. We talk lots and she's such a good friend to me. x3
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Eloarei Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That's so awesome, I love to hear stuff like that. ^^
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rabidscience Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
DAWWWWWWWW.

that last line cracked me up.
so cute.
Hanna's such a dork.
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:iconmoonkistforlife:
moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Student Writer
x] I know right?
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Rhiannon713 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Ooooohgodohgod YES. Frickin ADORABLE. <333333
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XTheAuthoressX Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
DUDE WE COULD HAVE TOTALLY SEEN THAT TOGETHER!

Awww, Markus is being all cute. Also, HANNAPOUT.

(Okay, so I'm facing little girls, clowns, and dreaded ham-and-cheese. Where do you get this army? Lol)
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
SRSLYRITE? I did the midnight thing too. x] hanna = ronniekins.

HANNAPOUT FTW.

(Ham-and-cheese NINJAS. my army is speshul.)
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XTheAuthoressX Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I went at 12:15 because we were totally awesome like that. (Did you dress up? /nerd)

Hanna would never be able to keep track of a rat. Or keep it living. XD

(Your army is awesome and frightening. I want an army! Lol)
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
Fffts. Awesome people see it AFTER midnight. Durr. (I WANTED TOOOOO. But there just wasnt any time. /lastminutewannabenerd)

xD Poor Hanna.

(ARMIES ONLY GO TO THOSE WHO COMMENT. >D So keep commenting, damnit. xD ily.)
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XTheAuthoressX Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
The guy getting the tickets made us flip out cause he was like "I'm sorry, I couldn't get the midnight tickets... *dramatic pause* so we're going at 12:15 instead, lol" (I was totally a Dementor in Love and like I freaked people out but no one got my Wrock reference and I was sad.)

{...} would have to take care of it for him. He could totally be his Hermione. And do his homework.

(I SHALL CONTINUE TO COMMENT SO ONE DAY I MAY HAVE AN ARMY TO COMBAT YOURS.)
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Student Writer
AGREED. But part of me is like 'Hanna would be too sad if a creature died under his watch. so maybe he WOULD take care of it.'
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XTheAuthoressX Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hanna would forget until it got sick and then be all like "ohmygod don't die on me" and take it to Worth and Worth would complain that he isn't a vet.
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Student Writer
XD YOU SHOULD WRITE SOMETHING ABOUT THAT.
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0ArmoredSoul0 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, Hanna...
:D
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
I KNO RITEEE? x]
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SugarKills Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, Hanna would so totally be a HP fan XD
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
YES. YES HE WOULD.
My little Ronnie.
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TrainerLN Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student
i'm sure i could fend those ham and cheese ninjas off with my own ninja skills, but i felt why should i take the chance? xD

hanna is such a cute little puppy! xD :heart:
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
AGREED.
And lolz.
Ham & Cheese Ninjas are mean little suckers.
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Digi-Writes-Fanfics Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010
Ahahaha, YES. I can so see Hanna doing this, dressing up and having an epic conversation with a twelve-year old and everything. I love how this starts out seeming so serious and in reality it's just Hanna being a dork. XD Aw Zombie, you take this so seriously.

Nice job~!
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
xD I really tried to make it sound all depressing and serious and ohmigod what did zombie forget? kinda thing, because I love when fics make you think one thing, and at the end it turns out to be ENTIRELY DIFFERENT. Trippy stuff. 8D
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Saint-Duke Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Baww, Hanna, you would <3

I really loved the line 'How could anyone forget anything they promised Hanna? That should surely be a crime'. It's like, he's so innocent, you should beat yourself up to dash his hopes like that ;<

Butyes, great work as always daaahling; look forward to more <3
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
Fffts. IT WAS SO LAAAAAAME WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? YOU'RE BLINDED BY LOVE.
bbydonthurtmenomore.

NOW GO TO BED, LOVER. ;D

i'llmeetyouthereinaseck?k.
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Saint-Duke Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
WHAT'S LAME HERE IS YOU THINKING IT WAS LAME >:U
Butmaybe I am blinded by YOUR AWESOMESAUCE <3

Alright <3
DON'T KEEP ME WAITIN'~
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moonkistforlife Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
Ffftsssss. < 3

Promise. ;D Just gotta find the lube.


LOL K AM I FREAKING YOU OUT YET?
Srslythough.
LOVE YOU AND GO TO SLEEP THINKING ABOUT ME.
...There I go again. x]
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Saint-Duke Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
<3

PSHNAW.
Takes a lot to freak me out 8D
OIWILLBBYCAKES.
You'll be in mah dreamssssahhhh~
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